Hi Elvin here today I'm going to show you my summer haiku I did. And if your woundering what an haiku is then, It's a short poem with 5 syllables 7 syllables and 5 syllables again. And I hope you enjoy.
Ka pai Elvin. Awesome haiku and great to see you blogging. I like the way you explained what a haiku is and chose a background that matches your subject. Have you checked your second line? I'm not sure if it has the right number of syllables.
Ka pai Elvin. Awesome haiku and great to see you blogging. I like the way you explained what a haiku is and chose a background that matches your subject. Have you checked your second line? I'm not sure if it has the right number of syllables.
ReplyDeleteElvin, I really enjoyed your Haiku. You used some effective and descriptive words to create some real life images and experiences in my head. Ka Rawe
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